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Thursday, May 15th, 2025 10:39 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
We as a reader see Anne’s and Captain Wentworth’s love story play out, but imagine the whole thing from the perspective of Uppercross.
- Anne is at Uppercross for two months
- In these two months, they’re barely interacting
- You have no idea about the child incident, and you see nothing suspicious in the carriage one
- They’re barely talking to each other at best, he’s colder to her than anyone else at worst (if you even notice)
- They acknowledge to have known each other in the year six “a little”. All of their behavior seems to confirm how irrelevant this acquaintance was
- Everyone but Mary expects him to marry Louisa
- After the fall, he disappears to his brother
- Next thing you hear is that he’s going to Bath
- When you travel to Bath as well, you see Anne and Captain Wentworth together again
- There’s no suspicious behavior here, either
- When Anne feels unwell after The Letter (that you don’t know about, although it happened right in front of your salad), Charles walks her home, hands her off to Captain Wentworth to go see a gun, and suddenly they’re engaged
- ????????
So much of Persuasion is dependent on knowing about their history together, of knowing each other in a way no one else does. And so if you missed all that, their engagement takes you by complete surprise, while it’s only a natural conclusion to us as the knowing reader
This is one of the best examples in all of literature for why mastering limited P.O.V., and choosing the correct “Narrative Voice” for the P.O.V. you choose, is so important. And I wish there were more (actually good)* adaptions of Persuasion out there.
BTW, this was the novel that convinced me that all fiction is mystery fiction.
*Netflix’s 2023 “adaption” completely missed the point, especially of Anne’s character.
Why, why O why, would anybody choose a 'sperm donor' (and it looks as though he made his donations very up close and personal, we are not talking test-tubes?) whose pitch was - on Facebook! - 'recipients did not have to “have a weirdo in a lab coat look at your hoohaw”. (The service was also free.)
Do we think that anyone asked for a recent STI check? The whole thing sounds ick to the max.
No, instead you got involved with this deeply odd and controlling bloke who claims he fathered more than 180 children and far from just vanishing over the horizon, in several instances has tried to gain custody of the resulting children.
In the US, where he was offering sperm donor services until 2017, there is a warrant for his arrest over unpaid child maintenance amounting to thousands of dollars.
I suppose at least this guy has been seriously spreading it about ('dozens of children across South America, Australia and the UK' and presumably USA), unlike the Dutch guy most of whose 100s of offspring are in the Netherlands.